Growing up in Oakland was not really easy because of all the violence in Oakland while growing up in Oakland I have noticed schools need more education We need to make sure kids don’t grow up in.
Dear Thomas, Thank you for sharing your work. My name is Ahmed and I am a student at Fremont High School. Something that I like about your work is that you really care about Oakland more than others. Something I have a question about is why stop the violence in Oakland then other places that have more violence then Oakland. Please feel free to comment on my work in the future. The address to my student blog is https://ahmedmfhs2022.edublogs.org/ .
Thank you,
Ahmed
Oakland may be the fourth most dangerous city (cbsnews) in the country, but many see it as if it was the worst. This city is most known for “violence”
Dear Velvet,
Thank you for sharing your work . My name is Ahmed and I am a student at Fremont High school. Something I like about your work is you wrote about Oakland and you want to let people know that violence should stop. Something that I have a question about is Why write only about Oakland CA. Please feel free to comment on my work in the future. The address to mu student blog is https://ahmedmfhs2022.edublogs.org/ .
Thank You
Ahmed.